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Dart Of Pleasure: HP, Sirius/Remus, Strong R to Nc-17

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Nov. 27th, 2005 | 09:40 am
mood: chipperneighbors stopped making noise
music: The Corrs- Radio

The guys over at marauders_slash really seemed to be wanting some Nc-17, and I just can't say no to that...  So even though this is far from being one of my favorites, here are some  puppie love goodness for all of you.

 

Title: Darts Of Pleasure
Author: Noam Jen Nov
Fandom: Harry Potter.
Rating: R/NC-17
Paring: Remus/Sirius
Summary: challenge response- Sirius likes dirty talk but Remus is shy. How does Sirius change his mind?
Disclaimer: all not mine. The lyrics and title are from “Darts Of Pleasure” by Franz Ferdinand.

A/N- this is the first fic I ever wrote for HP, and also the first and so far only adult-rated fic. Sirius/Remus is my favorite pairing, and this was written for a challenge. It's not my best work, but I like it.

You can feel my lips undress your eyes
undress your eyes undress you eyes
Skin can feel my lips they tingle
tense anticipation
This one is an easy one
Feel the word and melt upon it
Words of love and words so leisured
Words are poisoned darts of pleasure



“Oh love, so good…”

“Yes, it’s feels wonderful. Oh Remus You know how much I like it when you do that… “

Sirius’s words were whispered in Remus ear between kisses and moans. They were moving together, Sirius on top, the covers halfway down to the floor, in a slow rhythmic movement about to drive them both insane with pleasure.

“Oh please, you make me so hot…”

Knowing no other way to make the black-haired shut up, Remus took his face in his hands and brought him down for a kiss.

“You are so hot “ Sirius whispered as his lips left his lover’s mouth and moved to lick his ears, then down to his neck, then down even lower. His thrusts becoming hard and rough, just the way he liked it.

“Talk to me, love. Tell me what you want… do you want me to suck you off? To you want me to move my month, tongue, lips, and teeth all over you body, to mark you as mine? Do you want me to beg?  It makes you hot when I beg, doesn’t it? It makes me hot when you beg, you know? It makes me wanna fuck you senseless, like a little slut…”

Then, something in Remus’s face had changed. He opened in eyes, stopped moving, stopped responding to the other’s touch.

“What?” Sirius said, supporting himself on his hands and looking down at Remus’s averted eyes. “What’s wrong?!”

“You know I hate it when you do… that.” Remus wouldn’t look at him, his eyes were fixed on the way Sirius’s clothes were piled as a big mass on the floor.

“What? Talking?” Sirius gave a smile and buried his nose in Remus’s neck “You do it too…”

“ Not like… that.”

Sirius rose up.  Another look at the brown-haired boy beneath him told him he was blushing.

“Fine” he said and rolled to his side. They lied like that, motionless, for a few long moments. Sirius up against the headboard, his arms crossed on his chest; Remus next to him, laying down and sneaking looks up to Sirius with eyes filled with guilt, begging to be forgiven.

“Hey, come on…” Remus finally rested his hand on Sirius’s chest.  A moment later it was dropped to the mattress as Sirius got up and began dressing.

“Sweetheart,” Remus rose to sitting position. When his plea was left unanswered he made his way to his lover, took him in his arms from behind, and rested his head on his shoulder. “You know I love you, right?”
Sirius arched up, leaning a bit into Remus’s embrace.
“It’s just… I can’t do what you’re asking.”

“Oh bloody hell!” Sirius got on his feet, taking his shirt and tie in his hand “It’s just a little bit of dirty talk.”

“And it’s hard for me! You know that.”

Remus reached his hand “Come back to bed, please?”

“I’ll see you tomorrow.” Sirius said, walking away, shoes untied, shirt unbuttoned, not looking back even once.

XXX
The next night, Sirius showed up in Remus room as if nothing happened. They had acted normal all day, but Remus wrote it off as trying to avoid questions. As he saw Sirius began undressing he smiled widely.
Sirius had undressed himself, then slowly crossed the room and undressed Remus. He kissed him, sucked him off, fucked him and made him come twice, with out a word spoken.
When they were done, Sirius quickly left - his shoes untied, shirt unbuttoned - without saying goodbye, and without even a goodnight kiss.
Later that night, Remus realized he felt even worse.

XXX

The following days felt as normal as ever, but at night Remus felt as if he was living in a parallel world.
Sirius didn’t come up to his room, he didn’t kiss his worries away, didn’t send him that special smile reserved only for him… At night Remus was all alone.
He tried to talk to Sirius several times, and heard the same excuse every time “Quiet! Someone would hear you, someone will find out.”
At night, Remus found himself close to tears more times then he could count. He didn’t know it was the same with Sirius.

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It was the end of another long day for Sirius. He felt as if nothing could make him happy anymore, not even teasing Peter or hexing Snape.  His only thoughts were of Remus, and how much he missed him. But his pride kept him away, he was ashamed of how he had behaved the last time he had gone to his lover’s room, and he was mad at Remus for making him feel like rubbish the time before that.
He was ready for a good hand job and a deep sleep when a folded parchment on his bed caught his eyes.

My dear and beautiful Sirius

I’ve been going mad this past few days without you, you have no idea what you mean to me, you have no clue how much I love you and miss you.



Sirius was ready to throw away the parchment, convinced this was another sappy love latter. Still, he continued to read and was indeed very glad to discover how wrong he was…

I miss the way your clever hands move on my body, knowing where to caress, where to scratch, where to tease. I miss the weight of your body as it covers me, I miss how your tongue twirle in my mouth, I miss your taste… Those few lonely nights made me realize how much I love the way you talk to me, even if I can’t say those things myself.
But more then anything, I miss you being in me. It makes me so hot to think about it, to think about what we could be doing this very moment if you were right here, by my side, where I need you.
I will kiss you first; your kisses have powers over me you don’t even know. Most nights I can almost come just from the way you hold me, running you fingers all over my body, then follow with your lips. I want you to mark me. These days, I realize I’m yours, just yours, I can’t imagine being with anyone else.
If you were here right now, I would tie you down to the bed fully nude; your legs apart, hands above your head, all of you stretched in front of me. The candlelight would dance on your skin, as you would be all mine to worship, to love, to fuck…
I would slowly move from your ear to your jaw line, then your neck. Giving your collarbone (You know I love that spot) a good care, I would then go lower, your nipples, then lower, your abdomen, then lower, your navel, then lower… You will moan, I’ll have you shouting my name and begging before I’d take you in my mouth and make you come hard, so hard you couldn’t speak.
Then, I’d make you come again, but not in my mouth. Do you remember when you called me “slut”? Well, maybe I am one because I just love feeling you move inside of me, making the two of us one. I love the ruthlessness with which you slam into me, and then the softness with which you pull back only to enter me again, always reaching that place that sends me high, to the stars, to the moon, to heaven and hell.

Letter in hand, Sirius made his way to Remus’s room. He didn’t finish the later, he couldn’t; he was so hard, so horny, and he needed to feel Remus’ body as close as possible. He found his lover already in his pajamas, ready to go to sleep. He was panting hard, Remus hoped it wasn’t just from running.
“You…” He managed to say between hard breathing “I can’t believe…” Remus smiled, and the gap between them was closed in seconds. They just stood, holding each other, Remus face buried in Sirius’ neck, smelling his hair; Sirius was reading the last paragraphs of the love letter, moaning every few lines and causing Remus’ smile to grow ever wider.

“I love you so much.”
“Love you more.”
“Impossible!”
“Really?”
“Yes”
“Prove me wrong…”

They fell on Remus’ bed with a thud, as their lips touched and they found themselves addicted, unable to part, to stop, wanting to make up for the lost nights of loneliness. “I missed you too Remus, those days apart were such a torture, don’t you think my love?”

Remus didn’t answer

“What do you want me to do? Tell me Moony, do I make you hot like that, my tongue and lips moving…”

“Sirius” Remus smile was gone; he held his lover’s face and looked deep into his eyes. “I still don’t think I can… talk… like you want me to.”

The silence that fell scared Remus

“I love it when you do it, really, it makes me…” Remus stopped, unable to look at Sirius “I can’t, I’m sorry.”

“It’s okay” Sirius said, nuzzling the brown-haired, “just as long as I get a letter like that every night for the rest of our lives.”

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blogo, ergo sum

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from: girlnamedxena
date: Nov. 27th, 2005 07:04 pm (UTC)
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mmm... Sirius and Remus talking dirty. That should be a sub-genre :p. Anyway, I liked it. And I get to do the first comment dance- yay for me!

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Noam Jen

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from: noamjen
date: Nov. 28th, 2005 10:17 am (UTC)
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Thank you for reading, comementing, and of course for likeing it! ;D

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Coffee Girl

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from: manaray12
date: Nov. 27th, 2005 07:44 pm (UTC)
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I read this because it is sirius/remus and cause I love franz ferdinand more than anything in the world..This is amazing!!!

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Noam Jen

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from: noamjen
date: Nov. 28th, 2005 10:23 am (UTC)
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Yeah, the franz do rock our world, though right now I'm more into Kaiser Chiefs. But don't worry, the Franz would be back, simply cause Kasier's lyrics aren't so sexy and full with plot bunnies. ;) I remember talking to my friend about Michael (the song) and we decided there should be a hot guy named Michael in every fandom, so we could use that song...

I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you.

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Coffee Girl

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from: manaray12
date: Nov. 28th, 2005 08:27 pm (UTC)
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Kasier Chiefs are love!!! I got their Cd a while back now, but yes, I love them. Michael is my all time favourite song by Franz...although I've become rather attached to Outsiders.

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Noam Jen

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from: noamjen
date: Apr. 26th, 2008 08:04 pm (UTC)
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OMD (Oh my Darvin)

Okay, I almost forgot I even posted this story, and then just today realized someone had commented to this story so I came back and read all the comments just cause I don't know...

anyway - Outsiders rocked my world! I LOVE LOVE LOVE this song, it is so amazing! I didn't even know outsiders when you wrote it, in fact I only got to know it cause Ricky and Nick from KC played drums live with them and it is such a brilliant song.

I just had to say that!

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Marauder The Slash Nymph, NEW MOM

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from: marauderthesn
date: Nov. 28th, 2005 03:24 pm (UTC)
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I like this fic a lot, but it needs a beta. The idea of Sirius and Remus with dirty talk is something I've always liked. ;D

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silent_cynic

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from: silent_cynic
date: Dec. 6th, 2005 03:55 pm (UTC)
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Ahahahahaha that was good. Really good. Heheh I don't even know what else to say, that was brilliant really. Heheheh. Made me giggle and tear.

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Noam Jen

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from: noamjen
date: Dec. 6th, 2005 10:32 pm (UTC)
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Ohh, thank you so much!

I adore your icon!!!

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silent_cynic

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from: silent_cynic
date: Dec. 7th, 2005 12:40 am (UTC)
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Heheh thank you! But I'll not take credit for it...I first saw it on this community though- I think it was this one. :)

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sleeper6

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from: sleeper6
date: Dec. 16th, 2005 01:12 am (UTC)
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Oh wow! Very good. Nice job.

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Noam Jen

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from: noamjen
date: Dec. 16th, 2005 03:58 pm (UTC)
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Thank you!

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Marauder's Mad

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from: marauder_s_mad
date: Apr. 1st, 2008 11:46 pm (UTC)
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I liked it a lot ! especially Remus's letter, hehe ! ^^

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Noam Jen

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from: noamjen
date: Apr. 26th, 2008 08:01 pm (UTC)
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It is so nice to receive a comment after such a long time

thank you sweetie!

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